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FROZEN BRAVERY - CHAPTER 117th January 2009Every creature – magical or not – would have assumed that Jack Frost was a skilled troublemaker. You would've guessed that he was responsible for the cold gusts of wind that chilled you to the core; for the icy spot on the pavement that makes you trip over yourself; for the five-foot layer of snow that you have to scrape off your walkways, windshields and window panes.Jack knew very well who he was – the master of pranks, and the champion of tricks. But he wouldn't let his ego overinflate. You see, whilst every hero might be in the spotlight, and every king on his throne, Jack never forgot that they had sidekicks and knights – people who backed them up.And so did he.'Are the targets in sight?' asked Jack, murmuring to his co-conspirator.His friend leaned over the railing that they were sitting on, smirked as he spotted his victims, and nodded vigorously.'Then, on the count of three,' smiled Jack. 'One,''Wait, wait, wait,' said his accomplice, 'why do you